Hi Sneha,

I have written many short stories and have always tried to keep it short and crisp. Probably I must now start writing serial novels which tend to have a slow pace. I am working on writing a novel. A novel would mean more detailed description of characters,places, emotions etc.


Thanks for the comment. Will work on it.

Regards,

Naina

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A Daughter's Grief

by Sneha Subramanian Kanta

Well, Naina, well written, but at some points in the story, I found the pace too fast and sudden to be deciphered. Work on that.
You display great potential.
All the best.
Sneha.S.K.