Yes, as you've mentioned, it is a personal space and every experience is very enriching and enlivening for me! I feel adding of too many dialogues would have given it a more fictional feel. Thank you for reading and for your comments.
Mar 11, 2010 Rating
great! by: Anonymous
Yeah, I love working with kids, too. Even though this seems to be an article, I find that including dialogues helps enliven the narrative. And although I don't intend for this to be a criticism, but it seems ironic that while speaking of the capabilities of poor kids (the subalterns) that their voice is not heard. I would have also liked the article more if you had focused on just one of the two incidents that you narrated. But that being said, I understand how personal this is to you and it's great that you shared this experience. :)
Feb 20, 2010 Rating
Thank you by: Sneha
Thank you Eva. Words like this keep me going ! Your feedback means a lot to me.
Feb 19, 2010 Rating
Beyond Boundaries: The world of children by: Eva Bell
Out of their innocence and lack of malice, children can teach us many important lessons in life.Your experience with them must be very fulfilling. Bringing some sunshine into a loveless life is a talent which not many people have. Keep it up.
