Thank you for all your wonderful comments. Feedback is always an integral part of any writer's life...
Mar 11, 2010 Rating
i looooooove this one by: Anonymous
I am a huge fan of goth (especially goth that makes sense and does not revel in self-indulgence and I thought that this was exactly that. It was short and sweet and I loved the poems at the beginning and the end. Of course, there is always room for improvement. I thought that the description could have been improved, but it was great. This is the ideal internet short story in my opinion. I thought it was the best of your work by a mile!
Mar 02, 2010 Rating
Thank You by: Anonymous
Thank you Eva. Your words keep me going!
Mar 01, 2010 Rating
Madhav by: Eva
Loss is so heartbreaking. Even after years one feels the gnawing pain inside.
Well told.
Feb 27, 2010 Rating
thank you by: Anonymous
Thank you, Padmaja. Although this story is entirely fictitious and bears no resemblance to any person living or dead . . .
Feb 26, 2010 Rating
sad by: padmaja
hi it is a lovely , poignant writeup . feel for u .
