one of the best stories i've read!

by Suchaita

Wow! This was truly awe-inspiring and I loved the way you conveyed a large portion of the narrative through dialogue, which made the story come alive, and gave agency to the characters. I did not like the ending though since the problem that the couple in the story face is a very real one and a more pragmatic ending would have provided a universal solution that would have been accessible to other people who were not fortunate enough to have the same luck. But good job, anyway.

Comments for one of the best stories i've read!

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Jul 06, 2010
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
The Puppet Who Came Alive.
by: Eva Bell

Thank you Suchaita for your comments. I appreciate your criticism regarding the ending.
Will keep it in mind for the next story.
Eva

Jul 06, 2010
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
The Puppet Who Came Alive.
by: Anonymous

Thank you Vimala, Sneha and Padmaja for your kind comments.
Eva

Jun 19, 2010
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
puppet
by: Vimala Ramu

Wow, what a powerful story Eva ! I loved every bit of it.

Mar 16, 2010
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
puppet
by: Padmaja

lovely as it is arent we all puppets? way to go eva!

Mar 16, 2010
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
puppet
by: padmaja

lovely as it is arent we all puppets? way to go eva!

Click here to add your own comments

Return to Your comments.