Thank you, dad...for such wonderful comments. They make my day as always!
Mar 16, 2010 Rating
Relentless Feelings by: Subramanian
Dear Sneha
A very nice story depicting the child orphaned by the mother nature. The child may have become strong by virtue of being pushed into this position. It is like our body system which attacks viruses on its own and keeps us free from sickness, similarly the mind would also build a protection around.
Keep it up Sneha. I am proud of you
Mar 15, 2010 Rating
Thank you by: Sneha
Thank you Belladona for your valuable comments!
Mar 12, 2010 Rating
Thank you by: Sneha
Thank you for your feedback. Would like to mention that it happens when you lose your parents at a young age in such a dramatic fashion...a child cannot let go of certain inherent fears/insecurities.
Also, there are no straightforward solutions to everything always. Did we just hear open-endedness? I love that postmodern technique...
Mar 12, 2010 Rating
Relentless Feelings. by: Belladonna
When I read this story I was reminded of a poem which said, "Wounded hearts are slow at healing, If ever they are to heal again."
But Time is a great healer, and I'm sure the heart broken old man and the lonely child will see reconciliation as the only way to soften their mutual brief.
Mar 11, 2010 Rating
kids to kids baap re baap by: Anonymous
kids of all ages really relentless eh?
Mar 11, 2010 Rating
hmm by: Anonymous
I thought that the story started off really well, but it bothered me that there was no resolution. I also thought that Priyanka was a bit too articulate for a nine year old and I missed her childishness. You know how children can say the profoundest things in the simplest of words? I thought that was lacking.
