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A Life Within ...

by Subha
(Cochin, Kerala)

Day I knew your presence in me
You became an inseparable part of my world

Your image when in my womb
Gave me a new reason to live

Your heart, when I heard it beating
Like a melody it soothed my soul

When I felt your first kick
My happiness knew no bounds

My days started and ended with you
I loved to feel your every move

A feeling that cannot be put in words
A feeling to be lived and cherished

Best part of being a woman
Is being blessed to feel a life within...

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Jun 07, 2013
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Thank You
by: Subha

Thank you so much for the valuable feedback. It means alot to me. I am happy that you liked it and i will surely pay attention to your advice...

May 28, 2013
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Beautiful!
by: nuggehallipankaja

This is a poem which should touch a chord in every woman's heart! It is so real!Congrats to the
poet for taking up such a subject matter and conveying it so beautifully! There being scope to improve further,it would do well to the poetess
to go through the works of others like Robert Frost etc to give polish to the innate gift.

Mar 29, 2013
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by: nuggehallipankaja

very nice piece!

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