Tucked in a corner you lay all these years in a bustling street in the lanes of Amritsar
Tell me, didn't you yearn for me all these years among the shrill of the lake of The Golden temple early morning?
When a puffing long-distance train pulled into the station and you heard the faint engine sound about a mile away didn't you expect me to be one among the many getting down?
Jallianwala Baugh - - oh do you remember how we, silently walked through immersed in our thoughts of those long gone Don't you miss my company when you walk alone?
The month of November, oh tell me do you; do you miss the ajwain parathas we had together in the shivering cold?
Didn't you cry whenever summer came; not wanting to have aam ka aachar without me?
Nothing remains now; but a faint consciousness
Tell me, can you see my shadow gently lurking upon your soul whenever you descend from the steps of the veranda to go outside?
The way you described Amritsar Is Fantastic.Really would like to Visit Amritsar and feel each and everything.Beautiful Poem,Really got Inspired by it.Hope to hear some good words again !
Feb 08, 2012 Rating
Thanks by: Sneha
Thank you, Lakshmi.
Isabel; you've been so expressive with your feedback always. I'm so glad to know you feel this way!
Feb 07, 2012 Rating
i'm... speechless by: isabel
I faltered and paused, can't find the exact words to say... It all got caught inside, unshed tears stinging my eyes. Just SADLY BEAUTIFUL Sneha.
Feb 07, 2012 Rating
Touching...! by: Lakshmi
A touching poem from your poetic mind, Sneha. Really enjoyed reading.
Feb 06, 2012 Rating
Thanks by: Sneha
So sweet of you to actively comment, Mo. I'm heartened. You know how priceless your feedback is to me.
Feb 06, 2012 Rating
Thanks by: Sneha
Thanks Geetashree for your kind words.
Feb 06, 2012 Rating
Beautiful by: Mohit
This is such a beautiful poem sne. The journey to Amritsar was such a beautiful one. This poem reminds me of the entire journey.
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