by Enakshi J. Bhatia
(Bangalore)
Book : An eye for an eye
The layout, font (size, style), indentation, text alignment and the content presentation is fine. The author has successfully portrayed the emotional turmoil- right from the bright side to the dark one. The story is not restricted to one generation but two. The conflicts between the sons, has been demonstrated with utter intelligence. The readers cannot abstain from relating this difference with the kind of relationship the fathers shared.
Without fail, the author has depicted perfect balance in characterization of best of friends- Shujaat and Chand; and their sons- the best of enemies. Ironically, both Ram and Shaukat held grudges against their fathers. But one event after another, or literally speaking- playing the filthy game of bringing the other one down, they disgraced their fathers and the friendship they had shared with each other.
While reading, the readers will surely experience it in form of a movie because the characters will come to life and the scenes might seem relatable.
The foremost drawback in the book is that of editing and proofreading. There are major punctuation errors and time and again the dialogues have not been punctuated properly. Some of the sentences contain repetitions like ‘Let’s have tea first and then go up the balcony upstairs’. Use of Hindi words like ‘manhoos’ might offend the ones who prefer rich Literature.
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