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Destiny's Mystery

by Thasneem .A .A
(Mangalore, Karnataka, India)

I watched the rain soak the ground..
The eerie silence in spite of the pouring sound !!
The earth seemed so much in elation..
Each drop of water, got its fragrance elevation!
The months of separation from the sky..
They would never unite he was way too high!!

Each time the rain poured..
Feeling her love so close, her heart soared!!
She had seen his ups and downs..
The calm and the frowns!!
They gazed at each other everyday..
Hoping something atleast one of them would say!!

When together, they looked super fine..
Got separated at the horizon by a thin line!!
So close.. yet so far..
Within both of them was an emotional war!!
Destined to never unite..
To never get separated they used all their might!!
Whenever pours the rain..
She soaks it all in, along with her pain!!

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Dec 01, 2017
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Kudos!
by: Your Name:Roshni

Such a beautiful poem. Heart touching!

Dec 01, 2017
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Thasneem!!!!
by: Your Name: Thej

Reading another poem by Thasneem. Made my day. This woman has been passionate about poetry for as long as I have known her. She's a dentist now and the fact that she's still so passionate makes me smile and not stop. Keep going grandma! Love the way you play with words.

Nov 30, 2017
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Destiny s mystery
by: Shahanad

You write really well ... keep writing πŸ‘πŸ».
Waiting for more from you 😊

Nov 30, 2017
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Agape
by: Your Name:sherin

Expressive poem:)...agape love

Nov 30, 2017
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Thas
by: Missriya

Masha Allah..Keep going

Nov 30, 2017
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Good work Thasneem!!
by: Lia Mathew

You have more way to go thasssuu...😊😊😊😊

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