She put on the bangles, one by one Bright coloured glass ringlets That shone in a lovely coruscating flash of gold, green, orange and pink Winking seductively in the sun.
The bangles gifted to her by her father Were precious to the little girl For though she was the bangle-seller’s daughter---- Bangles she had none.
Two plaits adorned the little head And swayed to and fro And the patchwork skirt that she wore Fluttered in the wind.
She carried the utensils--- pots and pans and dishes Clinking and clanging To the green pond’s edge Where the birds chirruped in the hedges.
Picking up a fistful of ash She set to cleaning the steel containers, But today her heart was convulsed in delight At the thought of the bangles which encircled her wrists.
Humming a sweet melodious tune The little one did her chore Keeping at bay all the strings That could tie her to some woe.
She scrubbed and rubbed With all her zeal The bangles clashed, the bangles broke Into a myriad rainbow stars that glittered in the mud.
She stared enrapt As though awed by a spectre At the tiny pieces that were ornaments once Still not deprived of their iridescent hue.
A pearly tear glistening in her eye She realizes the inexorable truth That though she was the bangle-seller’s daughter She was not meant for the bangles, Nor were bangles meant for her.
Your poem ends beautifully. It captures the pain and tears of every girl who has dreams and music in her heart, but seldom gets opportunity to become the music. Hats off to you :)
Jun 10, 2012 Rating
Reply @ Isabel by: Ananya
Thank you so much :)
Jun 09, 2012 Rating
your poem... by: isabel
Your poem touched my heart especially the last stanza. Beautiful and well expressed, looking forward for your next creation...
Jun 09, 2012 Rating
Reply @ Sneha by: Ananya
Thanks:)
Jun 04, 2012 Rating
Your poem by: Sneha
All of the verse reminded me of Bengali literature and whatever little I know of it. Very evocative and tragedy put in profound words. Write on.
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