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Earth

by Varalika Dowlat
(Bangalore)


This is a pretty Earth
From the time of our birth

But now we are making it bad
So now it is feeling sad

It is turning from green to brown
So it is no more wearing a crown

We used to say what a nice breeze
But now we say what a pollution increase

If you want to feel the breeze
Then plant more trees

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P.S: The author of this poem is a sixth grade student.





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Jul 13, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Short and sweet
by: Parimala Rao

Varalika!kudos!!In your short and sweet poem you are able to express your love and concern for this Green Habitat and give a message too!
Jul 10, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Bright start
by: Anonymous

Good Start for little Varu. Expressive poem.

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Jul 05, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Good
by: nuggehallipankaja

Anita,you have a talented daughter! Writing at this age,and that too on an important current subject,and in this vein,it is something unbelievable!I wish her a glorious future!
Jul 04, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Good Effort
by: Ananya

Good effort Varalika! :)
Jul 02, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Have made us proud parents
by: Naveen Dowlat

Varu,

You have made us proud parents, with your environment consciousness and poetic acumen at your young age :)
Jul 02, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Path setting
by: Jayanthi V Sridhar

Great job Varu! I am proud of you for setting a path through a poem to save our environment, our habitat and our dear earth! Keep writing.
Jul 02, 2013
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starstarstarstarstar 		Awakening
by: Jyothi Gupta

Varalika this is indeed a good job ... A true awakening for the generation older .... Thumbs up ... Hope to see more

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