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Fake Smile

by Sahil.M.Beg
(Bareilly,UP,India)


I saw her coming towards me
I turned my face to look at her
Her head was held down
As she continues to walk past me

Her eyes were exotic
But tears were felling off
I tried to guess a reason for it
But i botched

She pulled out her hands
To wipe tears off
She saw me seeing her
And gave a fake smile

She walked along the walkway
Wiping her tears off
She again turned to me
And gave another of her fake smile



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Oct 14, 2015
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starstarstarstarstar 		Fake Smile
by: Name

I really like it.I was checking constantly this blog and I'm impressed!

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Feb 11, 2012
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starstarstarstar 		nice poem
by: khushboo

I too understand...sometimes we write just to express our feelings and feel satisfied...good poem
Feb 06, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Sahil...
by: Geetashree Chatterjee

I could understand what you wanted to say in your verse.
Feb 05, 2012
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starstarstar 		I AGREE BUT.............................
by: Sahil

I totally agree with you.
But I've Expressed What I wanted And I am In no Mood to make any change.I fell I have expressed my feeling that i wanted to In these many words only.
I respect your View and Will Keep it In Mind While writing another Poem
Feb 01, 2012
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starstarstar 		Your poem
by: Anonymous

Well, i feel the poem could have been more tightly structured. The emotions don't come out in full.

Sneha

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