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Last promise

by Padmam
(Kerala)

Your story brought out so many nostalgic memories to me.

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Sep 06, 2010
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Thanks Sneha
by: Lakshmi

Thank you Sneha for your encouraging comments. If you just look for stories you can see them everywhere(such as neighborhood, TV, Newspaper, internet, colleagues, friends,tel.conversation, own experience etc). When I'm in a creative mood I prefer to create a story based on such topics which were registered in my mind for some reason or other in the past, with my added imagination, and that is the reason you're finding humane in the true sense of it in my stories.

Sep 04, 2010
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Last promise
by: Sneha

Hi Lakshmi
One thing I always find in your stories is emotional depth. The situations, the characters...all of them are so humane in the true sense of it. While reading this story, I couldn't wait to see how it progresses. I liked the open ending technique. Very well done. You're undoubtedly one of the finest writers I've ever read. BEAUTIFUL !

Aug 30, 2010
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Thank U Eva
by: Lakshmi

Thank you Eva for your comments. You're absolutely right. There are several ways to alleviate loneliness, such as bringing happiness to others lives.

Aug 25, 2010
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The Last Promise.
by: Eva Bell

Your story is very touching.
Loneliness is the plight of many old people today. But this can be alleviated to some extent by bringing happiness into the lives of others.

Aug 24, 2010
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Thank you Vimala
by: Lakshmi

Thank you Vimala for your valuable comment and also for the Onam wishes. I'm glad to know that it has brought a great nostalgic whiff to all the Malayalis on the occasion, and others had an Onam ambiance.

This story was written sometime back, but suddenly I remembered to add it to iww on the right time.

Aug 24, 2010
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Thanks Padmam
by: Lakshmi

Thanks Padmam for your visit and leaving the comment. I'm glad that it brought you nostalgic memories.

Aug 22, 2010
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Nostalgic
by: Vimala Ramu

Your story has brought a great nostalgic whiff to all the Malayalis and an Onam ambience to us, non-malayalis. It is a very apt story from .suiting the occasion. Happy Onam to you and all our Malayali friends.

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