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Path of Love

by Khushboo Khilwani
(Mithapur, Gujarat, India)

If the path is beautiful
Why ask where it leads?
Beautiful path of love

You walk the path with your beloved
With hand in hand
Smile and Giggle
Share and Care
Trust and Understand
Hug and Kiss
To live those moments with someone
Moments of love
Moments of life

But the path
It leads to pain sometimes
This pain is no pain
It is the part of love
It is the creation of love
Gift of love

For those four moments
Moments of love and affection
Lifetime pain is worth taking.

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Nov 19, 2011
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Thank you
by: khushboo

Thank you for reading….

Vincent sir I will keep your advice in mind next time when I attempt writing a Poem.


Nov 15, 2011
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Lovely and poem for lovers
by: SHAHEEN

you have written a great poem so keep it up!!! i want u to write more and more such nice poem you r having mindblowing talent of writing congrates!!!!!!!!!shaheen

Nov 09, 2011
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Good Attempt
by: Vincent

Khushboo, congratulation for your attempt to write a poem. The poem is good, but lack feeling. Next time write a little longer poem with feelings.I am sure that you can do.

May god bless you with more imagination and insight.


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